Saturday, December 3, 2011

Assignment #4 Final


Dale Stephens’ general argument in his work, “The Case Against College,” is that a college education is practically useless in modern day society and people should not go. More specifically, Stephens argues that college kills creativity and it creates a large amount of debt. He writes, “Our education system cultivates a mind-set where students are rewarded for following directions.” Through this, Stephens is insinuating that students are being told what to do and there is no space for their own thought. In conclusion, Stephens believes that college is now overrated because of the loss in value of a college degree, the cost of a college education, and the creativity that is killed in order to get there.
In my view, Stephens’ argument is valid in some points. I believe that in today’s society, the creativity of students is being undermined. Standardized testing and lessons being based on the tests, creativity of both the teachers and the students are diminishing slowly. However, I believe that college is a place for students, and teachers alike, to allow their creativity to blossom. It creates many opportunities for their creativity to flourish. Therefore, I conclude that college is an important, innovative, and major part of life that should not be prevented, no matter the cost.

 Many would argue that the college degree has lost much of its worth but I believe that if a person with a degree in the specialty that they are best in, and enjoy, that they will pay off the debt sooner than everyone else thought. In the above video, many people explain their stories and how their enthusiasm for a college education has been slashed due to the rise in college tuition. They don’t believe a college degree is worth the price. In today’s society, there are many jobs that don’t require a degree, such as a web designer or a repairman. Basically, if you are going to school to get a degree for a career that is going to easily pay back the money you lost from tuition, such as a doctor or a lawyer, it is worth it, especially if the chances of getting a job right out of college are high. But, if you are going to school for a degree that many people are going after as well, you will more likely be stuck in debt for a long time, as well as not getting that job right after graduation. Stephens says that after college, students are forced to find a job to pay off the debt instead of being allowed to “take time to start companies, projects, causes, or initiatives.” The average debt is closely proportional to the salary of the career from their degree. It is all about what you chose to do. 
Both Stephens and I can agree that high schools have been killing creativity more and more but I believe there is a point where schooling helps expand a persons creative freedom. Creativity throughout mostly middle and high school has been thought of as less important. Schools have bunched all the students together in a group and started teaching them the ways of the past. They teach them history, math, English, and many other subjects. Students have been learning the same things for a very long time. The students don’t get much of a choice of what they learn. Even if they get to pick their classes, it’s a mostly limited amount of information that is given to them. Stephens understands this fact. His test of kindergartners only helps to prove the point. Stephens refers a study in which 1,500 kindergartners between 3 and 5 years old were given a divergent thinking test. Ninety-eight percent of kindergartners tested at the genius level. After five years of formal education, only 50 percent of children tested at the genius level. This study shows the damaging effects school can have on a child’s creativity. Killing creativity is like having no brain. Without the brain, the body would be lifeless, and without creativity in our lives, all of us would be the same. Leaving us without our own ideas or beliefs. 
As a student leaves high school and embarks on the journey through college, they realize their creative freedom. Yes, they can make their classes just like they can in high school, but the classes are less restricting. The teachers teach at their own pace, and even if that isn’t the right pace for the student, there are many more resources for them to get the information or help that they need to succeed. For example, as “Bobby” gets to his sophomore or junior year, he declares his major. He is able to go wherever he wants in life. His creativity has flourished beyond anything he ever thought before. This has happened to many college students all over the world, such as Ben Gulag at MIT who invented a motorcycle like machine. By doing this, they are expanding the world’s imaginative and creative side. Think of all modern inventions, even ancient ones, that you use in your everyday life, from wheels to cell phones. If the creators of these technological developments hadn’t went to college and expanded their creativity and knowledge, where would we all be right now? The video below is a speech given by Bill Gates, who did not go to college, who is encouraging people to go to college. He explains the importance of a college education, even during an economic recession.

                                      (Bill Gates on Investing in Education)

Though my college experience has just begun, I already have faced some creative freedom. I have expanded my knowledge of many new subjects I never even thought would be taught in a school. When I first spoke to my academic adviser, I told him to put me in whatever classes fit into my schedule and that were open. Because I have yet to declare a major, he put me in random general education classes that have already broadened my horizons. The classes that I have never really taken before, in high school, are the ones that interest me most. My nutrition and my "genres of music" classes have me hooked. In high school, everyone took English. Everyone took math. Everyone took history. I've never had classes like these. The new material and the fact that I know that there are other options, and I have yet to drop the classes, make me feel free. I like the fact that not everyone has to take the same classes and endure the same amount of work. The occurrence is almost shocking when it is first endured but when you are coming from a high school that doesn’t offer a lot of educational freedom, it is a liberating adventure. Your creative, imaginative, original, inventive identity is expressed and you will never want to be cooped up in your mind again.
My older brother, David, is 21. He is currently a junior at Buffalo State College. When David was in high school, he was always creative and very "artsy." He had a hard time with his grades all through high school, even middle school. The only classes he excelled in were his art classes. When the time came to apply to school, both him and my parents were so stressed. Unfortunately, he only got into two of the seven schools he applied to. As David went off to school, he was so excited to get out of high school and be free in college. His freshman year of college was spent getting all of his general education classes out of the way. Sophomore year, he took mostly art classes because he really didn't know what he wanted to do but he knew he enjoyed art. This year, his junior year, he had to declare his major, and he did. He declared himself as a Communications Design major. All throughout high school, David thought he had to get a job in the field of something he was learning in school, like history, or science. He went off to school, was exposed to the creative freedom, and now is going to do something he likes, and is good at.
Ultimately, I believe college to be worth the cost and the years of creative repression. Grade schools should stop the repression but the feeling of freedom, throughout college, is worth it. Unlike Stephens, I perceive college as a important part of life that will give creative flexibility that people of all ages need to experience. College creates opportunities that would never be accomplished without knowledge, creativity, or ambition. College formulates that same knowledge, creativity, and ambition. The argument Stephens makes is valid in some cases, but if you have the drive, the ambition, the determination, to succeed, you will. If you have all that, no debt can hold you back. College debt is just a “Jedi Mind Trick”, a “Force fear”. It is trying to force that creativity back into your brain. You shouldn’t let it. Helen Keller once said, “College isn’t the place to go for ideas.” She was right. College is the place to express yourself. A college education is your doorway to independence.

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Assignment #4 Draft (1)


Dale Stephens’ general argument in his work, “The Case Against College,” is that a college education is practically useless in modern day society and people should not go. More specifically, Stephens argues that college kills creativity and it creates a large amount of debt. He writes, “Our education system cultivates a mind-set where students are rewarded for following directions.” Through this, Stephens is insinuating that students are being told what to do and there is no space for their own thought. In conclusion, Stephens believes that college is now overrated because of the loss in value of a college degree, the cost of a college education, and the creativity that is killed in order to get there.
In my view, Stephens’ argument is valid in some points. I believe that in today’s society, the creativity of students is being undermined. Standardized testing and lessons being based on the tests, creativity of both the teachers and the students are diminishing slowly. However, I believe that college is a place for students, and teachers alike, to allow their creativity to blossom. It creates many opportunities for their creativity to flourish. Therefore, I conclude that college is an important, innovative, and major part of life that should not be prevented, no matter the cost.

  Many would argue that the college degree has lost much of its worth. They don’t believe a college degree is worth the price. In today’s society, there are many jobs that don’t require a degree.  Basically, if you are going to school to get a degree for a career that is going to easily pay back the money you lost from tuition, it is worth it, especially if the chances of getting a job right out of college are high. But, if you are going to school for a degree that many people are going after as well, you will more l ikely be stuck in debt for a long time, as well as not getting that job right after graduation. Stephens says that after college, students are forced to find a job to pay off the debt instead of being allowed to “take time to start companies, projects, causes, or initiatives.” I believe that if a person with a degree in the specialty that they are best in, and enjoy, that they will pay off the debt sooner than everyone else thought. The average debt is closely proportional to the salary of the career from their degree. It is all about what you chose to do. 
Creativity throughout mostly middle and high school has been thought of as less important. Schools have bunched all the students together in a group and started teaching them the ways of the past. They teach them history, math, English, and many other subjects. Students have been learning the same things for the last 30 years. The students don’t get much of a choice of what they learn. Even if they get to pick their classes, it’s a mostly limited amount of information that is given to them. Stephens understands this fact. His test of kindergartners only helps to prove the point. Killing creativity is like having no brain. Without the brain the body would be lifeless, and without creativity in our lives, all of us would be the same. Leaving us without our own ideas or beliefs. As a student leaves high school and embarks on the journey through college, they realize their creative freedom. Yes, they can make their classes just like they can in high school, but the classes are less restricting. The teachers teach at their own pace, and even if that isn’t the right pace for the student, there are many more resources for them to get the information or help that they need to succeed. For example, as “Bobby” gets to his sophomore or junior year, he declares his major. He is able to go wherever he wants in life. His creativity has flourished beyond anything he ever thought before. This has happened to many collegestudents all over the world. By doing this, they are expanding the world’s imaginative and creative side. Think of all modern inventions, even ancient ones, that you use in your everyday life. If the creators of these technological developments hadn’t went to college and expanded their creativity and knowledge, where would we all be right now?
                                      (Bill Gates on Investing in Education)
Though my college experience has just begun, I already have faced some creative freedom. I have expanded my knowledge of many new subjects I never even thought would be taught in a school. The occurrence is almost shocking when it is first endured but when you are coming from a high school that doesn’t offer a lot of educational freedom, it is a liberating adventure. Your creative, imaginative, original, inventive identity is expressed and you will never want to be cooped up in your mind again.
Ultimately, I believe college to be worth the cost and the years of creative repression. Grade schools should stop the repression but the feeling of freedom, throughout college, is worth it. College creates opportunities that would never be accomplished without knowledge, creativity, or ambition. College formulates that same knowledge, creativity, and ambition. The argument Stephens makes is valid in some cases, but if you have the drive, the ambition, the determination, to succeed, you will. If you have all that, no debt can hold you back. College debt is just a “Jedi Mind Trick”, a “Force fear”. It is trying to force that creativity back into your brain. You shouldn’t let it. Helen Keller once said, “College isn’t the place to go for ideas.” She was right. College is the place to express yourself. A college education is your doorway to independence.

Thursday, October 20, 2011


What? “Case against college”? What could this possibly be? I thought as I pulled up the article. Whatever.
I dive into the article. As I get to the part where he says “the problem is school kills creativity,” I nod my head. I mean yeah, school brings out new thoughts but it doesn’t help kids create their own thoughts.
“What Robinson doesn’t mention is that there is an alternative: unschooling,” I read. What? Is that even a real thing? I can only imagine where this article is heading.
Surprisingly, I agreed fully with Stephens when I read this paragraph. Finding a mentor instead of going to college can be just as helpful as college. A college degree is worth just as much as an old sock these days, but if you have someone who you trust and helps you with things in life, I believe that to be just as helpful as a college degree.
I also agreed with the last paragraph. Is the money and debt really worth that college degree that really has gotten you nowhere? I mean really, you’re paying $18,000 a year to go to a school. You graduate in 4 years with a degree. That degree is worth nothing. You don’t get that job you were hoping for. You are now $24,000 in debt. The bank will take away everything you own, except for that damn degree. The degree that has gotten you nowhere.
When I finished reading, I had to process the fact that I really didn’t mind reading this article. 

For Assignment #3, I was thinking about branching off of "Finding a mentor instead of going to college can be just as helpful as college." That would be my "moral" of the story. I haven't worked fully through it yet.

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Close Readings

If I'm going to be honest, I really hate doing close reading analyzing. Well, I guess I really just don't like how we do it in class. I prefer to annotate paragraphs in a whole. I like being able to put the sentence in context with the rest of the writing so it helps me decipher what the author is trying to get across. I will pick out certain parts I don't understand and translate it into my own meaning, or just something that is easier for me to comprehend.

What I really don't like about the close readings in class is how much ambiguity there is. I don't like how we pick out one sentence, with nothing surrounding it, and just attempt to understand exactly what the author means. I feel like just attacking the sentence as a whole, not just little words, is easier to understand and less complicated.

The easiest way for me to attack a close reading is to annotate and make notes in the margin and ask myself questions. When I'm done, I will go back and attempt to understand little things at a time.

Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Gillian Lynne Assignment


A Day in the Life – Age: 8 – 2011

“Gillian! Breakfast is ready!” I run downstairs as fast as I possibly can. I mean, come on, who doesn’t love chocolate chip pancakes. I stop immediately as soon as I see the look my mom gives me. It’s the usual look. The “calm down before I yell” look. I slowly walk towards my seat at the counter.
I jump up onto the stool and start devouring my breakfast. My feet twitch as I think about my day. I love seeing my friends at school and playing during recess. It’s my favorite part of the day: being able to just run around and do whatever I want. I finish my pancakes, and just as I am about to get up, my mom stops me.
“Gillian….”
“Oops, I forgot,” I say, even though I really didn’t. I pick up the pill sitting next to my cup of water. I pop it in my mouth, take a swig of water, open my mouth, and say “Ahhh.”
“Don’t get fresh with me, honey. Go get ready for school.”
I smile at my mom, and head back upstairs. As I get dressed for the day, I start to think about the pill I just took. Why do I have to take it? I wonder what would happen if I didn’t take it. Would I go crazy? Am I already crazy? But I stop there. I’m eight years old. How could I possibly be crazy?

I hug my mom bye, and get on the bus to go to school. I sit in my assigned seat with Johnny.
Johnny is one of my friends from school. I don’t have that many. Some kids think I’m weird because I don’t act like them. They like to do crazy things during recess, like jump off the swings and tackle each other. I normally just like to dance with my friends and jump rope.
We get to school. Johnny and I walk together into the classroom and sit together at our desks. The teacher starts the lesson.
She tells us all to take out a piece of paper and a pencil. We all do. She tells us to copy down what is on the board. For the most part, we all do.
Sometimes, I just don’t understand why some of the kids in my class can’t concentrate like I do. I get frustrated.


A Day in the Life – Age: 18 – 2021

            BEEP BEEP BEEP!!!” I smack the snore button.
            Monday morning, yet again. I lay awake in my bed. What do I have to today? Chem at 9. English at 12. Then, I’m done! WOO!
            I roll out of my bed and try so hard to wake up. I pull out my clothes for the day and start my daily routine. Fully clothed, check. Hair brushed, check. Teeth brushed, check. Shoes on, check. I go through my mental check list and make sure I have everything. Sometimes, everything in my head gets hectic and I tend to forget – Oops, can’t forget my medicine.
            Ah, my medicine. The only thing helping me stay sane. 
            I take my medication and I’m off for the day.

            English is finally over! As I walk out of class, I grab some lunch at the cafeteria. I sit there alone for a few minutes and I see a flyer. It reads,
                                    “Ever just feel like dancing?
                                   Come down to the Dance Studio
                                        No Experience Needed
                                           Just for the fun of it!”

            I contemplated whether or not I would go. As a little girl, I had always danced around but if I got to crazy, my parents would get mad. After a few minutes, I made my decision. I was going to go. Why not? It’s just for fun. I can meet knew people too!
           
            The next day, I was off to the dance studio. I was excited but a little nervous. What if other people were just so much better than me? I never really dance anymore. I’m just going to make a fool out of myself.
            Eventually, I calmed myself down enough to go in. I looked around and saw a dozen girls my age, and a few guys. Everyone was mingling, so I decided to join in. The music turned on and everyone just started breaking out and dancing. I jumped in.
            About an hour later, the music turned off and everybody was packing up. A man came up to me. He introduced himself as Jazz, the owner of the dance studio. He asked if I would like to join a few advanced classes. He said he had never seen anyone come in here and impressed him like I did. I said I would think about signing up for those classes.
            Maybe it was a good idea I didn’t take my medication that day.


A Day in the Life – Age: 28 – 2031

            My eyes spring open. I shoot up out of bed before my alarm can even go off. I make sure I turn it off. It’s Monday, the best day of the week. I pull out my clothes for the day and start my daily routine. Fully clothed, check. Hair brushed, check. Teeth brushed, check. Shoes on, check. I go through my mental checklist to make sure I didn’t forget anything. I’m good. And then, I’m on my way.
            I get in my car and I start off for work.

            I arrive at my destination. Ready Set Dance. A smile immediately graced my face. Coming here never fails to make me smile. It is my passion, what I was meant to do.
            I walk through the doors. I’m greeted by a dozen little girls and a handful of little boys. I try to settle them down enough so we can start the class.
            “Okay, everyone. Settle down. Today, we’re going to have a fun day! I’m just going to put on some music and I want you guys to do whatever you want. So long as you’re dancing somehow.”
            In my mind, this exercise is vital for these kids. They need to know how to express themselves and be creative. I realized that taking the medicine was holding me back. Stopping me from being myself. I don’t want these kids to feel like that. At all.

Monday, September 5, 2011

Sept. 6 Assignment

In The American Scholar, Emerson (not so clearly) states his beliefs on people and how they should create their own thoughts on the world based on their own experience. He believes everyone should think for themselves; that basing your opinions on everyone else’s makes you inferior. If Emerson was in the 21st century, his beliefs would not change but he would try to change the ways of the people in the 21st century. 
In the 21st century, we go to school, learn things from books, and say we know the world, inside and out. Many people don’t have real experience with learning on their own. According to Emerson’s beliefs, we know nothing. In order to know the world, we must go out and experience life, nature, and everything in between. 

Tuesday, August 30, 2011

Sept. 1 Assignment

“The theory of books is noble. The scholar of the first age received into him the world around; brooded thereon; gave it the new arrangement of his own mind, and uttered it again. It came into him, life; it went out from him, truth. It came to him, short-lived actions; it went out from him, immortal thoughts. It came to him, business; it went from him, poetry. It was dead fact; now, it is quick thought. It can stand, and it can go. It now endures, it now flies, it now inspires. Precisely in proportion to the depth of mind from which it issued, so high does it soar, so long does it sing.”
Literal Interpretation:
The idea of books is impressive. The first scholar learned from the world around him; give it any kind of interpretation he wanted and changed his ideas any time. Life came to him. Truth dissipated from him. Short-lived actions were what he did. Immortal thoughts left him. Business became his life. Poetry inside him died. Fact was not real. Quick thought was his life. It can change at any moment according to him. His ideas are in proportion to the depth of all the minds of the other people and will always be considered scholarly because no one can disprove him. 
Having read about the background of Ralph Emerson, I have learned that he is a non-conformist. He believe in individualism. In this excerpt, the scholar is fabricating his own ideas off of what he sees, not fact. All the other people that are conforming to his ideas are just listening to what he is saying. Business, and pleasing others to hush them, became part of his life. Any poetry and sympathy left him, as did all fact and truth. His life became spitting out quick thoughts to endure this ride. A ride on which he could live the life of fame and a scholarly existence. As long as his ideas are being considered some of the best, people will always pass these concepts around.  As one reads this excerpt, they can hear the almost angry tone Emerson uses to convey his feelings on conforming to this one mans “scholarly theories.”